Ok, I've got a first comment on the first couple of paragraphs. You begin by skimming over all the bad things about capitalism and then offer socialism as a cure for capitalism's ills, as if we haven't already learned from socialist history's failures (the USSR), without learning from laisez-faire capitalism's failures (Mafia).

However, as I mentioned in my comment about Pfizer, capitalism is itself morphing into socialism, seeming to come full circle and rather proving the Marxist theory of Thesis Antitheses, Synthesis. We are in fact witnessing the synthesis of...what?...emerging from capitalism. You might take advantage of these current observations to take a more persuasive approach to your own thesis.

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