I had to ask how you wanted the story discussed because as creative fiction, my requirements are different - you know like the style, emotions evoked from the writing, whether it paints a clear picture etc. BTW, you get an 'A' for all that.

I don't have much knowledge of what hell might be like. I think of it as a place without God and as such quite unpleasant. I feel a PM coming...

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