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Discussion in 'Creative Corner' started by ibshambat, Jan 7, 2018.

  1. ibshambat

    ibshambat Banned

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    We made a bubble of our minds -
    Connected over the distance -
    Our nerves together intertwined
    And in their center, Our Existence -

    Heartbeat to heartbeat - will to will -
    Passion to passion - and to reason:
    Keeping us in there from the chill
    In every day - in every season -

    And in the middle - in the core -
    Were our own centers: In this bubble
    They will be there, forevermore,
    All times protected from the trouble.

    The walls us from the world will keep
    And in there we will be together:
    In day, in night, in wake, in sleep
    Like swallow safe within her feathers.

    We made a bubble of our souls -
    How hard it was though to sustain it!
    To wait all day for you to call -
    To keep away all that was tainted -

    To keep alive, this heart to heart,
    This mind to mind, this soul to soul,
    To love you though we be apart -
    And to retain this perfect whole:

    The mental energy it took
    Made me make most of every moment
    My spirit tore, my body shook,
    And I was in a passion's torment -

    And then the bubble's walls concussed
    As all its contents lay there scattered:
    Eternal, present and the past
    Of both the spirit and the matter.

    The bubble burst; walls fell apart
    And what was thought inside protected -
    The throbbing souls, the beating hearts -
    Were there, open and dissected.

    It was as though the skin was flayed
    As centers lay there undefended
    I felt destroyed; you felt betrayed -
    But something happened unintended:

    I saw the beauty that is you,
    You saw how much I cared for you,
    I saw you from a closer view
    And knew indeed that I adore you:

    The bubble burst and spilt its core
    But yet the dream has not been shattered:
    I see you – clearer than before -
    And I can love you even better.
     
    ibshambat, Jan 7, 2018
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    DennisTate Well-Known Member Past Donor

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    Back in 1990 I was remembering a girl I had not seen since 1983.......
    and just the memories of her got me into a lot of trouble.
     
    DennisTate, Mar 3, 2018
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    tecoyah Well-Known Member Past Donor

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    You put flowers in your hair
    Soft subtle warmth
    A frame around the beauty
    Brittle in the frost of your gaze...your stare
    You put flowers in your hair
    hidden in your glow
    subdued by the glare
    You put flowers in your hair
    I cant see them...anymore.
     
    tecoyah, Mar 4, 2018
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    Bubbles ..

    The taint which destroyed..

    Trying to hold fast
    The core of all
    Where eternity seems
    To live.

    Bubbles..

    All connected
    Yet from where cometh the tainted?

    Illusion or sight?
    Hope for right?
    Frayed flesh
    Live in the bubbles?

    Then 'who shall deliver me from the body of this death'?

    Romans 7:24
     
    Last edited: Apr 21, 2018
    delade, Apr 21, 2018
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