this is good poem in good english not like me but good english tell mujahiden of iraq.

The Mujahideens Anthem


Welcome to Iraq
Oh! Modern day crusaders
Quoting words like liberation and democracy
To gain entry
Instead of open sesame
Alternative to dictatorship and tyranny

Christian Cross no longer visible
But your fate will be terrible
You will Experience hell
On this scorched earth
Bullets, landmines and bombs
Daily Without intervals
For u for whom the bell tolls

Your worst nightmares coming true
Daytime u witness things which make u feel sick and blue
And in the night unable to sleep
Nightmares and bad dreams
Wake up sweating and screaming
No escape from evil deeds and memories

Why did u join the crusade?
Why did u want to be brave?
Why did u come to be a hero?

Why did u believe that war is noble?
Why did u believe the lies of Bush and Blair?
Why did u believe that they were just and fair?

No warm welcomes at all
Except by bullets and bombs
While u expected garlands of flowers
Kisses from women
And the band playing songs of victory
Reminiscent of France in 45

The dole was better for u
Coz in Iraq u will lose your humanity,
soul and your dignity

We are Muslims
We bow only to Allah
No matter what horrors u inflict
U will never have control
Of our land and spirit

Ask the Mongols
Who came saw and conquered
Whose fate and destiny
Was to be converted

What does fate have in store for u?
A quick painless death if you're lucky
or even a slight wound
Self inflicted maybe

You wish to finish your tour of duty quickly
And get back home to mummy and daddy
Kids and wife and the rest of your loving family
But if the Mujahideen have their way
You're going home in a body bag
Or wounded mortally
Limbs and body parts missing
Buried underneath our soil
Where they will remain for eternity
Even after your army
Withdraws

When you return home
With your medals and glory
You find that
Your mind is scarred
Worse than your body
Unable to sleep peacefully
Thoughts of suicide
Inside your mind
Unable to be a husband or daddy

Drink and drugs
Relationship breakdown
Domestic violence
Divorce
Kids taken away
Friends keep their distance
All on your own
Ignored and neglected
Just like the women
and children u killed
Buried in secret graves

U obeyed orders
For Queen and country
Where are they now?
While u need them urgently

U suffer in silence
And show defiance

But the nightmares continue

Every day is a living hell
Anti-depressants and sleeping pills
Counselling doesn't help
the dreams come and leave
as they please
naked women screaming
girls begging for mercy
Men and boys blind folded
Crying for Allah and their mothers

Eventually driving u insane
another veteran
and victim of illegal invasion
Not registered a casualty
Hidden away quietly
Out of sight and out of mind
Literally

By People of iraq and Mujahideen fighters

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Poetry these days has become artless-- no order, no rhythm, stanzas of varying size, mismatched rhyme structure, no all-encompassing beat that sets the tone for the piece.

Why, today, all you need to do to be a poet is write some prose and widen the margins.

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. "You have found the secret message. Do you have too much time on your hands? ...Let it go."

it had a message

another perspective
close enuf

really...we need some iambic perameter in here. That was really hard to read/follow, that and it was kind of drab.

Tip for iraqiresistances: Less is more. Can you put that in a haiku instead?

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We shall crush you like beetles, Terrorists.

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"Duty is the most sublime word in our language. You cannot do more. You should never wish to do less." - Robert E. Lee

just like we crushed the viet cong. those pesky indigenous people who fought the occupying french and American forces to self-govern consistent with their cultural values. if you want to see what will happen to you just read the history of all such people who choose to fight for their family and homeland. iraqiresistance, you don't stand a chance.

reminds me of a quote:dyslexic of borg

We would have won the War in Vietnam...But politics prevented us from it

Same that will more than likely happen here...Unless a Republican wins the 2008 election.

Haven't you seen First Blood? (*)(*)(*)(*) hippies...

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"Duty is the most sublime word in our language. You cannot do more. You should never wish to do less." - Robert E. Lee

Oh look up raghead, in the sky

Tis a daisey-cutter and you will die

No 72 houris to serve you well

Cuz you will go straight to hell.



Inshallah.

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Read this post quick before the mods delete it!

Luckily for both of you, bad spelling won't send you to hell.

Although, given that English isn't the OP's native tongue, he at least has an excuse.

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